Gice i know the poetry meter is mostly good

but do i depend on people to find it too much sometimes?

the idea is if people read it naturally, it would still have meter

here is one of the rhymes in question:

"An empty church could be a sign of people who don’t sing,

Or it could be a humble and disguised commissioning."

possibly people would naturally read it like this:

OR it could be a HUM ble and dis GUISED

but I want them to say "or IT could BE a HUMble AND dis GUISED"

it is hard for me to know because some people can't read rhyme.  but some think that those people do read rhyme if the rhyme is right.  but i think you have to get into it like rap.

Any thoughts? I will ask my friend Claire Bateman.

She said it is okay but later I figured out the solution:

"Am empty church could be a sign of people who don't sing,

But maybe it's a humble and disguised commissioning."

I think most of my rhymes are fine. There could be a few issue but I was worried that I had messed it up on all the poems I ever wrote.  But I think they are fine. So the new book is cool. I still have one more upload because I left off a poem. I do not know when I will post it.