Ok everyone I wrote two new poems today.I felt good about them.  I posted them. I got good reactions. One did better than the other one but I like both poems. I hope some people get the clean room poem.

I mean am I wrong. Do I need to try another rendition. More specific maybe of veneers or something.

It is just weird if it is true. 

But anyway I feel tired. I have not been getting that much sleep. Soon I need to do laundry.

Does anyone have any opinions.

One thing I think is an issue is that one poem matches current events and the other one doesn't and people are reading it that way.  But I disagree with those bubbles of new york times and christian nationalism now, both current events interpretation contexts that are very much a direct result from social media power manipulation and a ruined platform for friendship and creativity.